Posted by admin | Posted in Nike Air | Posted on 24-07-2010
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Air Assault White
how's my story?is it hooking enough?is there anything i can improve?constructive critissm welcome?
She awoke with a start,baffled to find the left side of her cheek plastered to her lavatory seat. Her head was throbbing and her tongue seemed glued to the roof of her mouth.A strong stench of rancid puke permeated the air,reaching her nostrils and assaulting her orfactorily.
She looked around,and to her dismay noticed a trickling puddle of yellowish white spew all over the polished marble floors. Her DKNY shirt had a rivulet of the crap too.
"Oh fuck!" She tried to get up but her coordination was off balance and the action caused her to stumble into a heap of tangled limbs."Damnit!"Plum wasn't nouvel to swearing when she was pisses and right now she intended to foul mouth at everything.
The door to the bathroom opened to reveal her mother in her pink nightie and matching cashmere flip flops. It was safe to say she wasn't fully awake until she took in the sight before her.
A few grammar errors, but good start. It makes me wonder what happened to the character to lead to that situation and what is going to happen next.
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